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    The Price for Affection

    Hey everyone!

    So I've been brainstorming some ideas and have finally decided to give this story writing thing a try. I have just started writing it and with luck will have it up sooner than later. But I can give you a preview into the story.

    "What happens when a Master has two pets but only wants one? The Master lets them decide for him; no mercy and anything goes, the small price for affection."

    Wish me luck and I hope it will rank up there with the greats like Ted Mark, Cage, Jessika, etc.
    GL
    "There's nothing wrong when a woman fights, just when she chooses not to!"

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    Talking Re: The Price for Affection

    Sounds cool ... good luck ... may the best (or worst) bitch win! LOL! :-)

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    Re: The Price for Affection

    Well, here it is. I hope it doesn't suck! All criticism is welcomed.

    The Price for Affection

    It had been several months since the Master had taken in his two lovely pets. Both of them loved him very much, learning all they could from him along with just being in his presence. The art of eroticism and mortal combat were their education as Master made sure each knew all they needed in order to serve him to their full potential. Their purpose in life was to serve their master and his every whim, but most of all, to be selfish in their ways and hold no mercy unto anyone but their Master.

    Angela was the first woman taken into his care, won in a game of baccarat from another master. She was quite beautiful in his eyes, standing at 5?3? with a larger frame; her fair white curves were what attracted him along with an imagination that suited his tastes perfectly. Angela?s breasts were perfect and full, filling a 38D cup perfectly. One of Master?s favorite features on Angela was her ass and cleanly shaved vulva, her sexual core was tight and always ready for him. Dark reddish, brown hair softly caressed her shoulders, down to the middle of her back which accompanied her hard hazel eyes.

    Tasha was his other pet whom he had taken in off the streets. She was nearly the opposite of Angela and Master?s one chance for sympathy was used on taking her into his home and ownership. She too was just as beautiful as Angela, standing at 5?3? and had little body fat; her lightly tanned form was smaller. Her breasts were petite and perky, barely filling a 36B cup, but her ass was perfect in every way along with her clean shaved mound; this sometimes caused Angela to be jealous of her knowing her master preferred this. Tasha?s dirty blonde hair barely hung past her ears as she enjoyed a shorter hair style, which worked well with her soft emerald eyes.

    Master sat in his throne of a chair, somewhat lounging and slouching in it as watched his two pets lay on a fur rug in front of the fireplace. The only source of light in the room was that of the soft glow from the fire, bathing the pet?s curves with a blood orange tint. They wore nothing more than what they were brought into this world in but didn?t care as this pleased their master. A glass of champagne sat next to his side as he would occasionally bring it to his lips, drink, and set the glass back down.

    It was about this time he let out a silent sigh as he watched the two, shifting in his chair to rest an elbow on the arm rest. He knew this moment would come sooner or later but felt no urge to choose which would earn their rightful title to be his one and only pet. The burden showed on his brow as he looked from one to the other, every possible answer came to the same result in his mind. It had to be done and even though he would kind of miss one of them, he knew he would enjoy the sight of more.

    ?Come here pets. Kneel before me.? He softly said as he continued to lean on his elbow.
    Both of them slowly rose from the rug and gracefully walked over to him, kneeling in front of him, each with their head bowed. ?Yes Master?? Both had nearly said simultaneously.

    ?When I had brought you both in to my home to serve me, only I knew that this day would come. It is a hard decision to make and I have decided that only one of you will serve as my pet. A rightful name will be given to the chosen one while the other is banished from my home for all eternity. However, I love you both very much and will not make this decision. The two of you will decide for me, right here and right now. Use your skills I have taught you to see who will be my chosen pet.? He calmly stated to the two before leaning back in his chair and sipping from his champagne.

    The two pets looked up and nodded to their master before looking at each other. They had grown quite fawned of the other over the past few months but also had learned to despise as well with their selfish ways. Both slowly rose to their feet and backed off in opposite directions, their feet leaving the fur rug and experienced a slight chill from the stone floor. The light from the fire showed their faces in an eerie form as these two beautiful women were about to make the ultimate decision for their master.

    Master?s lips slowly curled into a grin as he watched the two stare at each other. The light was one thing but he could see their eyes and the hatred that grew between them now as the prize was too great to share with one another. Every little detail was noticed as fingers and muscles flexed, his pets ready themselves for combat. Several more seconds past by as he watched them before he barked out loud, ?Fight!?

    The two charged in at each other, each taking a different avenue of strategy for the opening act. Angela?s arms rose up as one hand tried to grab hair while the other shot past Tasha in hope of a successful headlock. The grabbing of her hair was good but Tasha was much faster than her larger companion and moved to the side while thrusting a knee into Angela?s gut. The force of the impact caused Angela to release Tasha?s hair as she backed up a few steps, sucking in air. This gave Tasha more than enough time to throw several combination punches at several targets. Angela?s face, breasts and belly all suffered as the lighter fighter was much better at boxing than she was. Each punch produced a dull pop of a sound, leaving red welts behind.

    A few moments of this and Tasha had nearly back Angela up against a wall, most of her punches finding their target. Angela?s breasts and belly had received most of the damage as she tried to protect her face from a knock-out punch. The red welts soon became bruises as each hit was perfectly placed in the same zone, each elicited a painful mewl from Angela?s lips.

    Tasha continued her assault as Angela tried to find an opening, knowing her body couldn?t take this kind of punishment for long. It was when Tasha drew back for a powerful hook shot; Angela reacted quickly by dropping down and bull rushing into Tasha?s midsection. The smaller one didn?t see it coming and was not prepared for it as Angela rammed into her hard, taking them both down to the hard stone floor. Tasha took the brunt of the force as her back and head screamed in pain from the impact, her vision blurred for a moment as she tried to figure out what had happened.

    Angela rose quickly and backed up as she ached all over from the punches, a small whimper escaped her lips. She surveyed the damage and looked back to Tasha on the floor; her eyes showed rage as the pain fueled the fire, his lips curling into a sneer as she moved over to the downed woman. It was the little one?s time for pain she thought as her foot was raised and brought down on Tasha?s mid section. The impact was brutal as there was a dull thump resounded from it, Tasha?s eyes went wide as her mouth let out a squeak from the air rushing from her lungs. Reality had returned to the downed woman but it was an unpleasant one as she saw another foot dropped but this time over her breasts. Another thump is heard as Angela?s heel bore down and crushed Tasha?s left breast.

    The smaller woman let out a scream of absolute pain as she felt her beautiful tit being crushed, hands moving to rid her of the foot, eyes wild with pain and frustration. Tasha lifted her lower end up and used her own feet to kick at Angela. A lucky shot hit her in the jaw, forcing the larger woman to move away. They separated from each other and tried to sooth the wounds they had received so far, small moans and deep breaths were all that was heard besides the crackle of the fire.

    Master was amused of the little spectacle as he continued to sip his champagne and watch how his decision would turn out. It was only a matter of time before this little quarrel would turn into something much bigger, more vivid. He wanted only one pet but for that one pet to tap into something people hadn?t used for eons, an instinct that only came out when someone?s personality leaves and the raw basics instincts are the only thing to remain.

    Angela and Tasha looked back at each other, their breasts heaving as deep breaths are taken. The light from the fire glistened off their skin as the heat of the fire and fight caused them to lightly sweat. Each surveyed the damage they had caused to their opponent before looking into each other?s eyes. They could see and feel the hatred, which only fueled them more as they both soon lost their grip on reality, letting their primal instincts take over. The two women screamed at each other as they ran at each other, meeting on the fur rug. The collision was brutal as fists, claws and bites were thrown wildly; their only objective now was to hurt the other one mortally.

    This last for a few moments as skin was bruised, breasts were slashed and faces were chewed on. These two once beautiful women had turned into something more right before their Master. His teachings and their willingness to serve him had culminated to this very moment; and it showed as Master could only smile at the carnage before his eyes.

    Then suddenly there was loud, deafening scream as Angela dropped to her knees, her hand cupping her womanhood. Tasha had reach down during the blind fury and raked her nails across Angela?s smooth vagina, scoring a nasty advantage by nearly cleaving her opponent?s clit. Not to lose the upper hand, Tasha grabbed Angela?s hair and began to rain punch after punch into her defenseless face. The larger woman moaned loudly as her lovely face soon swelled up from the vicious beating; her right eye swelled shut, her nose bled profusely and her lips cut in several places. Tasha looked at her opponent who only whimpered before letting her fall to the floor.

    The small woman turned and looked at her master, licking her lips as she smiled at him, hoping he was pleased. The smile she was given in return was that of pleasure but also anticipation as Angela quietly arose behind Tasha. The larger woman, though severely beat, did her best to fake a knock out in order to fool her opponent. It was then Angela?s arms wrapped around Tasha?s waist and secured tightly as she heaved with all her might, lifting the smaller woman into the air while arching her back as far as she could. The smile that was on Tasha?s face turned into a horrified look as she realized that she was on the receiving end of the suplex.

    The rug didn?t provide much cushioning as Angela was soon bridged while Tasha slammed down on the floor, the back of her head and shoulder taking the full force. The momentum of the suplex flung Tasha?s legs across her body, exposing both hers and Angela?s moist vulvas to their Master. The only sound that came out of Tasha from the impact was a half strangled scream. Angela held her like that for a second before releasing her, Tasha?s body crumpled to the floor as her opponent rolled over. This smaller woman had nearly ruined her face and she only had begun to return the favor.

    Angela crawled over to Tasha?s body and laid her out before mounting her waist. The hatred for this woman had grown to a new level and she had grown to love it as she used it by grabbing hands full of hair to lift Tasha?s head up off the floor. The larger woman growled loudly before tilting her head back and rushing it towards her opponents face. The head but made solid contact as her forehead smashed her opponent?s nose to one side, the sound of cartilage breaking was clearly heard. Angela leaned back again; her forehead covered in blood and let loose several more powerful head buts. Tasha?s face was soon a sight of horrific gore as her nose was mangled from all the impacts and several teeth were either smashed or knocked out of the sockets. Her breathing could be heard clearly as ragged breaths were taken, though it was a struggle from all the blood that flowed down her throat.
    GL
    "There's nothing wrong when a woman fights, just when she chooses not to!"

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    Re: The Price for Affection

    The larger woman stood and dragged the nearly unconscious woman to the feet of her master. She rolled her over so she was face down and sat on her opponent?s ass as she continued to look deep into her master?s eyes. Then leaned over, snaking her arm around Tasha?s throat and leaned back, bringing Tasha?s top half up into a choke. Angela secured the arm with her other elbow and squeezed with all her might. The ragged breathing of Tasha was replaced with a strangled gurgle as her hand struggled to free her neck of the arm.

    Tasha?s bewildered eyes looked around as she clawed at the arm, trying fiercely to free of her airway. Soon her face turned a bright red as the oxygen in her lungs depleted, each scratch on Angela?s arm becoming less and less severe. Eventually there wasn?t even a gurgle as Angela pulled back hard on the choke, making sure that she would be Master?s only pet; Tasha?s eyes soon bulged and her face became a bluish, purple tint as one hand fell to the floor while the other very slowly reached out to her master. Her tongue lolled out the side of her mouth as she tried to say his name and yet no words came out.

    Master during this had nearly gulped his champagne as he watched the life of one of his pets slowly extinguish. He only smile and continued to watch, even as Tasha silently pleaded for him to help. Just before her eyes began to glaze over, he chuckled to himself, sat up and calmly stated, ?Let her go.?

    Angela held on a bit longer as she wanted to her this one?s life and take her rightful prize, though did as she was asked since not following Master?s instructions meant severe punishment. The choke was released and Tasha?s body slumped to the floor, there she violently coughed as air rushed back into her lungs. Angela stood and bowed her head as she waited for her master to speak.

    ?Come pet, sit on your master?s lap.? He said as he patted his leg.

    The woman did so and leaned into his chest, her lips giving way to a large smile, ?I do as you wish, Master.? She softly remarked.

    ?Good. From now on, you are known as my angel and will serve me as my pet.? He whispered into her ear as he stroked her matted hair, kissing her softly on the cheek.
    Master looked down at the defeated woman before him and smirked as he looked into his angel?s eyes and said, ?Finish her.?

    Angel couldn?t smile any larger as she quickly nodded and stood from his lap. She grabbed Tasha?s feet and dragged her over to the rug, leaving her on her stomach. Stepping over her, she kneeled facing her opponent?s feet, arms wrapping around her waist again. Tasha could only moan as all her strength was sapped from her body, too badly beaten to retaliate. Several deep breaths are taken as Angel gathered up her strength and hoisted the smaller woman up with her.

    Tasha?s legs dangled over Angel?s shoulders as she turned around to show her master exactly what was about to do for him. The smaller woman?s arms dangle near the floor as she saw her master upside down; smiling at her though it looked more like a frown from her position. Her mouth opened as she began to say, ?Master??

    It was then that Angel licked her lips and dropped to her knees, driving Tasha?s head into the floor with as much force as possible. The pile driver to Master looked spectacular as his naked pet finished off another woman for his viewing pleasure. The contact with the hard floor resulted in Tasha?s head bending sideways, her neck snapping from the pressure and produced a sick, wet crunch. The woman?s eyes instantly glazed over as her last image was her master watching her finale moment on earth. Angel released her body and it fell to the floor where it soon convulsed for a few minutes, any and all throws of life escaping her body.

    Master stood and lightly clapped his hands, ?Well done pet. We?ll let the hired hands take care of this mess.? He took her hand and led her out of the room as he commented, ?I guess Tasha couldn?t afford the price of my affection??
    GL
    "There's nothing wrong when a woman fights, just when she chooses not to!"

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    Cool Re: The Price for Affection MOAR pleez


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    Re: The Price for Affection

    Thank you Ted Mark! You're eye for details and the perfect photos are such a huge contribution to this site. I'm literally honored that you found photos for my pets in this story. I don't know when the next story will come out but I plan on sticking with Master and Angel if everyone enjoys this story.

    By the way, any helpful tips for making a story more indepth compared to what I have done? It almost seemed short for being my first story. As said before, criticism is more than welcomed.
    GL
    "There's nothing wrong when a woman fights, just when she chooses not to!"

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    Re: The Price for Affection

    Gosh! That was very exciting & hot! :-)

    Meaow
    Jessie
    A straight bitch is just one who hasn't tasted pussy yet!

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    Re: The Price for Affection

    Quote Originally Posted by gabrielluther View Post
    By the way, any helpful tips for making a story more indepth compared to what I have done? It almost seemed short for being my first story. As said before, criticism is more than welcomed.
    Length and violence content is alright. But I doubt that Angel will last longer when Master dares to put her against other Master's warrior-slaves, of different races, and sizes, in that underground world of huge betting, sex-slavery and swinging he lives in.

    Do Masters take active participation in the cage duels themselves or they are just for the viewing pleasure and the after sex with the winners? Masters' lives are made easier in 2010 as, with the layoffs around the country it's now easier and easier to find jobless females eager to grab some dough (plus bed-and-breakfast free, and gym for free, and steroids for free, and dicks for free!...) even if they have to take a few slaps from another woman.

    That would make your accurate pen to distill more of this hot stuff in future chapters.

    I'll be here waiting. Compliments for the good writing, and excellent grammar.

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    Re: The Price for Affection

    It does bring up some more ideas and some twists/turns that can be taken in certain stories...

    Thanks agraf74, I'll take those ideas into consideration.
    GL
    "There's nothing wrong when a woman fights, just when she chooses not to!"

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    Smile Re: The Price for Affection

    Actually have a film based on this idea that I've had for years. "Fighting Slavegirls"....Master takes them out and sits and watches his girls fight it out in the dirt. It was quite a find back in a time when I thought I was alone in ths....

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